【BEC写作】举例说明：商务写作中的“You attitude”(2)
作者： [db:作者] 发布时间：2017-01-17 14:21:44 点击率：
下面，来看几个例子
You ll never regret using our bank.
改 You will benefit from our many banking services.
We cannot ship your sofa until July 1.
改 Your sofa will be shipped on July 1.
We close the caf every night at 1130 so that we can go home.
改 The caf will remain open until 1130 pm for the convenience of our customers.
After just one week of our weight-loss program, you won t feel fat and miserable.
改 After only one week of Aerobics for Fitness , your clothes will be looser and you will feel strong and trim.
I will not be able to attend the dinner on Friday, March 3 but I will be present for the luncheon.
改 On Friday, March 3, I can attend only the luncheon.
You must pay your bill by the tenth of each mouth to receive a discount of 2 percent.
改 By paying your monthly invoice by the tenth, you will earn a 2 percent discount.
If you want to follow these instructions
改 You will find these instructions helpful, for
If you want to order this book
改 Just sigh the enclosed card and Effective Reports will soon be on its way to you
We hope this meets your approval
改 We think you will like this change of procedure because
Unfortunately, I have no business experiences.
改 My courses in business administration at Indiana State University have given me an understanding of the fundamentals of management and supervision.
We have learnt of the unfortunate circumstances of your accident, illness, and losses in the stock market.
改 We are sorry to know what has happened to you these days.
